~ Slow~

Sluggish and settled
  or softened with age
Low speed and laid back
  a lagging old sage
Overdue and overwhelmed
   out of order and old
Wound down  and weary
   but her heart is pure gold
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brown Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 11:29 AM
Lovely writing Patricia. We all should be happy to live to a ripe old age. Love, Carol
Lopez Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 10:23 AM
There is always something golden in visiting with those who have much experience.... very nice!
Culverhouse Avatar
September 15, 2009 at 6:21 AM
nicely done!
Riley Avatar
September 14, 2009 at 7:40 PM
Wonderful acrostic, I can relate to, you did a great job on this. Keep up the good work. a joy to read. judy Riley
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