Tim B Poet Rhyme

Slivers

We see but a sliver
Of golden gleams,
We see but a sliver
Of prophetic dreams,
We see but a sliver
Of many terrific things,
We see but a sliver
Of his graceful wings;
For these heavenly things,
God asks eyes fully open
To see and then betoken
Others to see a sliver
More, of that golden river.


-See the dreams of demon's so easily as we lay unconscious.  Pray you wake up before the nightmares begin.

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 28, 2012 at 11:43 AM our vision is His Plan for our lives.. heard a teaching in Rome.. stating.. u cannot take GOD out of His Creation.. oh so true like your splendid words Tim... deeply touching and filled with much inspiration luv..

Sara Kendrick January 28, 2012 at 6:06 AM Yes, we are seeing nightmares of Satan's control on lives.Everyday on the news we see what Satan is doing all over the world and close to home..Enjoyed reading your very impressive work..Sara

Nette Onclaud January 27, 2012 at 11:50 PM mesmerizingly divine, tim.. your repetitive approach chimes with the graceful tone of this soulful write..:) huggs

Russell Sivey January 27, 2012 at 10:00 PM Beautiful write my friend! I love the lines, "We see but a sliver Of golden gleams..." I especially love the second line it says so much in just three words! It's amazing what you can write with so few words! Fantastic poem, Awesome Work!!