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Sliver the Soul

Sliver the Soul Had it been easy to construe meaning of life, Logical mind would stop digging and being keen, No fear of death could put an end to all strife, As we unveil treasures of nature umpteen, Sliver half the soul that doesn't believe in unseen. Written Feb 25th, 2016 For contest "Fragment of life" by Broken wings

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 11:02:00 AM

Dr Upma, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/10/2016 10:37:00 AM

Perfect description of a fragment of life my friend. 7

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/10/2016 10:37:00 AM

Perfect description of a fragment of life my friend. 7

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2016 6:23:00 AM

A very unique piece, well done Upma.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/9/2016 4:37:00 PM

This is very lovely Dr. Sharma. Congratulations on your placement!

Jan Allison

Date: 3/8/2016 1:19:00 PM

many congrats on your win Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/8/2016 8:33:00 AM

Serious words on a serious theme... Congrats...

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/8/2016 6:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! I like how you used 'sliver' in this theme. Excellent.

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2016 6:49:00 PM

Great words of wisdom, Dr. Upma. Congratulations on your win in the 'fragment of life' contest. Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2016 3:47:00 PM

Nice, Upma and congrats in the contest.

Lu Loo

Date: 3/7/2016 10:25:00 AM

Dr. Upma, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/2/2016 1:16:00 PM

- Meaningful and great written Dr. Upma - Good luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Peterson

Date: 2/26/2016 12:32:00 AM

Maybe the logical mind will never see or sense but then in some moment have it dawn, but only later on. What a thought to realize you've gone through life half blind. These are such lovely words, compressed to just five lines and so fit to savor, as I do.

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/25/2016 10:59:00 PM

I'm beginning to wonder if life does have a meaning, Upma. Greed and vanity seem to rule this planet. I doubt that is what we're here for. Great write!