Sliver Crevice

The jester cradles the dove
As orders from Gaia shove
Demanding denial of love

He witnesses her slow dance
With fools unwilling to chance
Their grit to aid her advance

Mutely, he struggles to bend
To boost her faith to ascend
Here at the threshold of end

Even those jokers can see
What she proves destined to be
Despite their menacing glee

Yet the proud clown strokes his bird
To calm her savage heart's word
With farce and wit most absurd

Loud giggles force him to cry
Shaving time until she'll fly
Hope fate's discord won't deny

One lone feather drifts in hand
As he collapses to sand
A lonely smile cut in land
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
December 28, 2008 at 11:12 AM
Interesting write. A lot of metaphor. Nicely done. Vince
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