Slipping Through My Fingers

The moment after I say, 'I'm happy,' I'm not
                                                       ~ Thus thickens the plot
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Hawkins Avatar
November 22, 2022 at 2:42 PM
Happiness is contagious; how can you spread it without saying it out loud, Sadly, your Monoku is true, Gershon. Good one, Thank you.
Lawless Avatar
November 21, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Nothing pisses off the fates like the sound of someone saying.....Well.....you know and I'm not saying it as i am enjoying the spoken feeling....."
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November 21, 2022 at 9:09 AM
This is so true of all of us Gershon. I think that's because once we say that we start noticing all the things in life that are not perfect and we forget all the things in life that really are. Good one here. God Bless, JB
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