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Slipping Away

There's an eerie feeling in this place, and it ain't a good feeling Feels like you're trapped in a case these four walls enclosing Life's slipping, slipping away Worrying, thoughts all screwed up with nowhere to go nothing to do Just you in this room, stuck trapped like quick sand Sinking slowly trying to grab a hand You're locked inside while life's slipping, slipping away And as you life goes, your smile froze you begin to fold as tears begin to flow and still life keeps slipping, slipping away SS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/24/2011 6:24:00 AM
Thank you for posting and allowing us to enter into your world of poetry today. The diversity of our poets and their poetry here at PoetrySoup is astounding. It was my pleasure to read your poetry today Joya. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2011 5:56:00 PM
Creative and interesting expressions , Joya
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