Slipping Away

When I think of death 
I think what a tragedy
But whenI look at that persons life
I say it's beautiful
How does that affect you and me?
When we're tied in a knot eternally
For better or worse they say
It seems like each time I get close you slip away
What is that about?
I just wanna shout
Give me a clue what to do and I'll make it up to you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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October 29, 2010 at 11:45 AM
I am stopping in today to thank you for all your wonderful comments Samantha. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Love, Carol
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