Slippery journeys

 winter's freezing temps
 snowy days with icy woes
 slippery journeys
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Zahid Avatar
January 19, 2024 at 6:59 AM
That's a great write Joseph . I hope you are doing great. Cheers
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2024 at 1:04 PM
Oh I really like this, Joseph
Greenhough Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:37 PM
A very descriptive poem. I like how icy and slippery are combined in the poem. It reminds me of my fears of falling today because of a large snowfall
Nicole Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 6:09 PM
As winter arrives, we proceed with caution, especially when pathways are slippery. Thanks for the reminder, Joseph. Always be careful, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:53 AM
True. Great Haiku :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:50 AM
Aptly describes a day in the life a person who lives in area where there is snow and ice. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:22 AM
- I walk with life as an effort on these roads, Joseph :) - Winter picture perfect :) - hugs
Poet Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:38 AM
Cold temps, snowy days, and slippery roads make winter difficult. This haiku about winter struggles is well crafted, Joseph
One Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 10:18 AM
Great imagery my friend..
Empress Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Brilliant winter haiku. I love how you’ve used wintry wordplay to deliver this, especially “ snowy days with icy woes“ the depth in that line! Life is a slippery slippery journey! Pleasure reading this.
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