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Slippery journeys

winter's freezing temps snowy days with icy woes slippery journeys

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 1/19/2024 6:59:00 AM

That's a great write Joseph . I hope you are doing great. Cheers

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2024 1:04:00 PM

Oh I really like this, Joseph

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/11/2024 6:37:00 PM

A very descriptive poem. I like how icy and slippery are combined in the poem. It reminds me of my fears of falling today because of a large snowfall

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/11/2024 6:09:00 PM

As winter arrives, we proceed with caution, especially when pathways are slippery. Thanks for the reminder, Joseph. Always be careful, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 1:19:00 PM

nicely done, Joseph. We have an artic vortex bearing down on Texas....soon we'll have snowy days and slippery journeys, Enjoyed the read, have a great evening, Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/11/2024 11:53:00 AM

True. Great Haiku :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2024 11:50:00 AM

Aptly describes a day in the life a person who lives in area where there is snow and ice. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2024 11:22:00 AM

- I walk with life as an effort on these roads, Joseph :) - Winter picture perfect :) - hugs

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/11/2024 11:14:00 AM

Hello Joseph May, yes winter can be a slippery season. When it is freezing rain. If I am out in freezing rain, I walk very slow. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/11/2024 10:38:00 AM

Cold temps, snowy days, and slippery roads make winter difficult. This haiku about winter struggles is well crafted, Joseph

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2024 10:18:00 AM

Great imagery my friend..

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2024 9:19:00 AM

Brilliant winter haiku. I love how you’ve used wintry wordplay to deliver this, especially “ snowy days with icy woes“ the depth in that line! Life is a slippery slippery journey! Pleasure reading this.