Slimmer's Ode To a Croissant

luring crescent moon
I resist
your strong attraction


10/10/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rigoler Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:40 PM
Bonjour Wendy! Quand je me trouve à Paris, la première chose que je fais est de manger un croissant avec de la confiture. C'est tout ce que je suis autorisé à faire parce que je suis diabétique, je dois donc rester fidèle à mon regime (diet). Merci d'avoir commenté sur mon nom Rigoler, c'est un nom inventé, bien sûr. / M
Watson Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:49 PM
Et vous savourez sans doute chaque bouchée ! Merci de votre réponse, Maurice. Je me demande s'il existe quelque part en France un vrai 'Monsieur Rigoler!'
Dietrich Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 5:54 PM
Oh I LOVE this one. They ARE so hard to resist. I have even more problems with eclairs!
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:45 PM
Thank you for commenting, Andrea. I used to love them until my waist told me a secret about them!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 3:14 PM
I had to read this twice and then look at the title before I understood, and then I began to be amazed and astounded. How smart!
Watson Avatar
October 26, 2018 at 3:48 PM
Smart as long as I keep resisting?! Thank you for such kind comments, Caren.
Watson Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Thank you for your 'visit', Caren.
Green Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:03 PM
That was fun, very creative Wendy.
Watson Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thank you,Chris. It's decision time now - this one or 'blessed bread'!
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