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Image result for pictures of fuchsia in the sky at early sunrise Collum Lune/Haiku 3/5/3 words instead of syllables.

slightly

slightly beyond daybreak
fuchsia to purple highlights east....
crickets in unison

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Andrea Dietrich

August 23, 2026 at 1:27 AM

Very nicely done, Sara. An above par haiku

Sara Kendrick

August 23, 2026 at 4:54 AM

Why thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the uplifting review. Sara K. ⭐

sara Etgen-Baker

August 17, 2026 at 4:43 PM

great title, Sara K. wishing you well, Sara B

Sara Kendrick

August 18, 2026 at 4:50 AM

Your visits today have⭐ been a very nice surprise, Sara B. You've made my morning. Sara K. I hope your day is filled with many blessings.

CayCay Godwin

August 15, 2026 at 7:57 PM

ANOTHER SWEET GEM, you're rocking and rolling, Sara. CayCay

Sara Kendrick

August 16, 2026 at 4:36 AM

Thank you, CayCay. I appreciate the nice review. Sara K. 👍

Terry Griffiths

August 15, 2026 at 1:55 AM

This really well conveys the transition of the sky from dark to light (which I feel could be a metaphor for things being slightly different and transitions in general), and I love the purple and fuschia highlights. The picture illustrates the poem perfectly. Great job! 💕

Sara Kendrick

August 15, 2026 at 4:36 AM

Why, thank you, Terry. 👍..Sara K.

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