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slices of deep night

slices of deep night cut through heart's embittered walls--- Dove's light passes by Haiku On Enlightenment Contest For: Marvin Celestial Daniel Port

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Date: 9/3/2014 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika
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Date: 9/3/2014 5:30:00 PM
a real beauty. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 9/2/2014 12:54:00 PM
- Daniel, really great haiku - Congrats with your 14th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/2/2014 11:51:00 AM
Daniel, this is a such a beautiful haiku! Well done and congratulations on your fine win! Pandita
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Date: 9/2/2014 8:29:00 AM
this seems a near perfect description of a "spiritual awakening". Nicely crafted Haiku.
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Date: 9/2/2014 7:15:00 AM
Awesome haiku Daniel n so is ur win! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/2/2014 5:05:00 AM
Dropping back to congratulate you, daniel
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Date: 8/14/2014 6:13:00 AM
Very deep and thought provoking write, Daniel
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