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Slices of Deep Night

slices of deep night

cut through heart's embittered walls---

Dove's light passes by



Haiku On Enlightenment Contest
For: Marvin Celestial
Daniel Port

Copyright © Daniel Port | Year Posted 2014

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September 3, 2014 at 8:51 PM

Congratulations on your win! Excellent piece! Kika

Andrea Dietrich

September 3, 2014 at 5:30 PM

a real beauty. Congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 2, 2014 at 12:54 PM

- Daniel, really great haiku - Congrats with your 14th place in the contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos

September 2, 2014 at 11:51 AM

Daniel, this is a such a beautiful haiku! Well done and congratulations on your fine win! Pandita

September 2, 2014 at 8:29 AM

this seems a near perfect description of a "spiritual awakening". Nicely crafted Haiku.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

September 2, 2014 at 7:15 AM

Awesome haiku Daniel n so is ur win! Big congrats!

September 2, 2014 at 5:05 AM

Dropping back to congratulate you, daniel

August 14, 2014 at 6:13 AM

Very deep and thought provoking write, Daniel

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