Sleepy, Tired, Hungry, Thirsty

Drown me deep in Seas of Sleep, And never would I want to wake To Lies of Life that make me weep (By slumbered Dreams of me as Sheep) I hunger for a "normal" life, Weary for a willing "Wife", And though I thirst, drink very worst- The Darkened Days just filled with Strife!

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/29/2013 8:24:00 PM

I hope you get some sleep but not lies to make you cry or a life of strife. No bad days for you only good nice write

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/30/2013 8:30:00 AM

That's very sweet of you to say, Robin; I appreciate that and the compliment; thank you! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/20/2013 7:21:00 PM

That does not sound like a good combination. I hope all your needs are met. Awake, Energized, Content, Refreshed

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/22/2013 7:40:00 PM

My pleasure.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 8/21/2013 9:01:00 AM

lol It's a terrible combination, and it's also an expression (or lament) I've heard my mother say a million times in jest. I think this poem has a "desperate" feel to it, so I wanted a title that reflected some kind of universal desperation. I appreciate you stopping by for a read, Richard :)