Sleepy Cows

the cows are asleep
snuggle closer to get warm
frightened by the bus
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 5, 2009 at 6:37 AM
thank you - I've been working on creating haikus from my dreams - this is one in which there were lots of cows asleep by the side of the road and I was in a school bus that had an accident and was toppling end over end...
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December 4, 2009 at 2:49 PM
Hahaha,,this made me chuckle..those poor sleepy cows..lets let them sleep,What next after the bus?the tractor?:)..love your style in writing,,well down R-Charma
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December 4, 2009 at 12:08 PM
Nice work Ra, loved the image this paints...Raul
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