Sleepless Wonder

Inquisitive minds
Of any kind
 
             ....Loom...
 
In dark rooms
Until they bloom
 
Into bright places
Flourishing in light spaces
 
Upon UN-crowded happiness
Far too few find it …. Unless….
 
They leave the herd they travel with
 
And leave to the past old time
And the future that at present does not exist
 
The illusions that create the current emptiness
 
Only then can rigid thoughts bend
Like color bows
               To a hidden pot of gold
                                             …Or buried gem
 
                                                          Discover… INgenious
                                                          Discover… YOUr best
 
It’s different for each
It’s not the fad of Everyday Street
 
As much as we are one
We are merely a piece
                               …unique
 
Inquisitive mind listen to an inner greatness speak
It’s not outside of you
 
It’s below your crown
And above your sole
 
Stop wandering
               Stop wondering

Search your soul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Raven Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Hi Brandi, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Mike.
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April 6, 2016 at 10:51 PM
Brandi, Nice to see your poem showcased in Justin's "Where Freedom Finds The Fire Contest List." Love LINDA
Simpson Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Thank you, Linda! Nice to see you!
A. Sharma Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 2:24 AM
Congrats on a worthy win Brandi..
Simpson Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Thank you, Dr. Sharma!
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October 13, 2012 at 8:30 PM
Lovely, Enjoyable read. Style is well done. Good free verse is hard to find. Victoria PS thanks for the comment on Job int in Africa I was trained in journalism-- learned to be brief! when writing use as few words as possible..it's a personal challenge!(unless I am telling a yarn!)
Simpson Avatar
April 5, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Sorry for the belated response. I must have missed this. But thank you, Victoria!
Komala Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 4:45 AM
Great write and love this Brandi,,,:) SK
Simpson Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 6:48 PM
Thank you, Sukmawati =)
Poet Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 5:45 PM
Enjoyed this very much!!
Simpson Avatar
July 15, 2012 at 10:09 PM
Thank you, Kash!
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:50 AM
Stopping by today to thank you for your kind comments on my writings Brandi. I hope to be reading your poetry for many years to come. Thank you for sharing your poetry with us and may you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
Simpson Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 8:51 PM
Thank you, Carol! =)
Palmer Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 8:59 PM
you are a great writer Brandi, like the design,welcome to the Soup you are gonna be a flavourful addition
Simpson Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 9:23 PM
Thank you, Richard. I appreciate that coming from you because you are a great writer yourself.
Hill Avatar
July 10, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Enjoyed this one. You have to leave the heard, I agree.....TAH
Simpson Avatar
July 11, 2012 at 8:50 PM
Thank you, Tobey!
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