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Sleepless This Night

Sleepless this night,
only dream of sleep

ticking of the clock
driving me mad

moonlight touching
your sleeping face--
gift of this long night.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/26/2012 5:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Shanzi" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/22/2012 2:08:00 PM

Ah!!!!Such a delightful picture that you have described..Enjoyed reading this winning work..((()))Congrats on your win..Sara

David Williams

Date: 7/22/2012 10:35:00 AM

Kash, congrats on your win, a great image...David

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/22/2012 9:57:00 AM

A touching write from your poetic heart, Kash. Congrats on your wonderful win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2012 9:51:00 AM

One of my favorites in the contest. Congrats to you, kashinath.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2012 2:22:00 PM

ohh yeah, bud!.. auper congrats on your win... i forgot to post mine, yayy!..:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2012 5:52:00 AM

congrats Kash on an amazing win for this incredible write luv.. feeling the essence ..

Joseph May

Date: 7/20/2012 6:36:00 PM

congrats on your win Kash...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/4/2012 3:56:00 AM

One for my favs.. Such a beauty you've penned...Lovely..Charma

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/28/2012 6:11:00 AM

So heavenly, even though you are sleepless.. This made me smile Kash :) enjoyed it loads

David Williams

Date: 6/27/2012 2:41:00 AM

Kash very romantic, I like it...David

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/26/2012 11:47:00 PM

How beautiful is the sentiment in this lovely poem Kash. I loved it, having had my great share of sleepless nights too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/26/2012 7:39:00 PM

YOurs uses imagery so much better than mine does, Kashinath. This is one to make us sigh!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2012 7:10:00 PM

Kash, awee..i know how it is to only want sleep... tossing and turning, goes with the ticking of any clock... xool...poem...pd

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/26/2012 2:40:00 PM

This is a glorious and sentimental write my friend! I really connected with this poem! The touching feeling I get from this poem rolls out into me from your clever write! You've created a masterful poem Kash! Great Work!!

Tanya Harrington

Date: 6/26/2012 1:04:00 PM

Lovely...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2012 9:51:00 AM

Yes, pure nightmare....you can call me....I`m sleepless at nigth to...49633221 888333222 009222111000 - good you have a lovely face to admire in this LONG night. -oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2012 9:19:00 AM

awwwright.. i'm here first!..:) a 7.5!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/26/2012 9:17:00 AM

i'd love to be sleepless if only to watch that face... what a gem, kashi!... hugggs!