Sleepless Nights

layin my head down
heavy pillow and angry dreams
layin my mind down
cant sleep but its all a dream
Creme de la creme or cream of the cream
right now, thoughts are the worst of the worst
been up so long my eyes are blurred
20/20 vision but didnt see the turn..
of the clock, tick tock 1am
blink and yawn thats 20 minutes
hidden in the internet
on a quest.. 
embark to a reasonable test
to exercise..
the inner workings of the mind
and maybe in time, my mind..
at rest, can i go to bed
layin my head down
warm pillow, cold hot sweats
layin my head down
eyes red, lookin like a mess
is my head so heavy
and thoughts so many 
.. my minds an alley
so full but plenty empty
its 3:16, 
my room is clean
kitchen nice and neat 
took a shower, shaved, brushed my teeth
took a jog on the street
took care of the air conditioner
no more heat, finally beat
feel like i can go to sleep
so...
i lay my head down
mind at rest, eyes heavy
i lay my head down
6:30 alarms going off
its time for work, have to get up

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 4/16/2016 1:03:00 AM
Austin Carmen, nice to see this one again. pd
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Date: 7/10/2013 9:45:00 AM
restless you are, you clean and do anything to pass time till you get tired by the time you finally rest it's time to get up, such problem this holds for plenty, I enjoyed this write, LUV SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:29:00 AM
wow wow! I hope this is for Leonora's sleepless contest... love the interaction with insomnia. good luck...LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:57:00 PM
thank you, it is for leonoras contest, thanks for the feedback!
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