Bl Devnath Poet Senryu

Sleepless Night

sleepless night
                                                     passes many 
                                                   there's reasons

                                                    In deep love
                                            night takes away sleep
                                                    romance on

                                                     if loved one
                                            suffers from deep pain
                                                     tear oozes

                                                    for phone call
                                             waiting fades the night
                                                  lengths the time                                                   

                                                       Enemy's
                                             conspiring mind's plan
                                                   keeps awake

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Richard Lamoureux July 23, 2013 at 8:49 AM Good one, congrats Bl Devnath July 23, 2013 at 12:15 PM Many thanks my friend for your wishes. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud July 23, 2013 at 5:38 AM well-deserved win, bl.. many congrats to you!..: hugggs Bl Devnath July 23, 2013 at 12:15 PM Loved much for wishing me congrats. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich July 23, 2013 at 12:01 AM hi, BL. I see this made the list. Congrats to you. Bl Devnath July 23, 2013 at 12:13 PM Hi! my friend, a lot of thanks to you for wishing me congratulation. Loved always, bl

Len Gasun July 22, 2013 at 10:56 PM My huge heartfelt congratulations on your fantastic win my dear friend, bl. It’s an outstanding poem indeed which really deserved its shining win. Thank you so much for giving me your precious gem in my contest and for your support. Love lots and big hugs, Leonora Bl Devnath July 23, 2013 at 12:14 PM A lot of sweet thanks to you for your wishes. Inspired by you always. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A July 9, 2013 at 1:24 AM Love them all BL, yes depriving one from sleep, is crazy... like an enemy at hand.. soup mail....LINDA Bl Devnath July 9, 2013 at 7:50 AM Many many thanks for your boosting up comment. Loved always, bl

Sara Kendrick July 6, 2013 at 4:52 PM Great work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this evening..Wishing you good luck in the contest..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 6:18 PM Thanks always and loved always my sweet friend.

Lucilla Carrillo July 6, 2013 at 10:53 AM This is good and very well written. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 10:53 AM Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl

Charmaine Chircop July 6, 2013 at 10:23 AM All very great senryu...My favourite..is your last Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 10:58 AM Thanks a lot for your comment. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich July 6, 2013 at 10:18 AM yes, you captured various reasons for sleepless nights. HOpe you don't have as many as I do, my friend. Good luck in the contest, BL. Bl Devnath July 6, 2013 at 10:52 AM Thanks a lot my friend. I agree with you without any doubt. Loved always, bl