Premiere Contest WinnerSleepless Night

counting pink daisies
lost in thought
bedroom wallflowers

6/11/19

MagiCicada13 form 5 3 5 syllable counts

Contest: MagiCicada 13 or 17 Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Maureen McGreavey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 5:12 PM
Hello Tania Kitchin, That is a lot of counting pink flowers on the wall paper. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 22, 2020 at 1:23 PM
You are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Kitchin Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 6:26 PM
Thank you
Yamin Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 7:47 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Keep it up. -Mohammad
Kitchin Avatar
May 20, 2020 at 1:03 PM
Thank you
Flaherty Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 4:02 PM
Soothing Wallpaper
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 4:40 AM
Thanks, makes me think of my grandmother's house!
Lamoureux Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Delightful!
Kitchin Avatar
July 5, 2019 at 11:21 AM
Thank you Richard! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 7:36 AM
I can picture that wall...so pretty! Congratulations, Tania!
Kitchin Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Thank you Kim! :)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Congrats, nice reading.
Kitchin Avatar
July 2, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Thank you!
Canerdy Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 1:30 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Tania! Love this! Janice
Kitchin Avatar
July 1, 2019 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Janice! :)
Gboe Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 1:28 PM
''Lost in thought'' I admire this, it give a vivid clued about the out come of your mind been occupied with thoughts that seem hard to comprehend.
Kitchin Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Thanks, instead of counting sheep, I am counting daisies, lost in thoughts...
Stiles Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 12:56 PM
Beautiful poem, Tania. You made me miss my pink teenage bedroom.
Kitchin Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 8:08 PM
Thank you!
Gauthier Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 11:08 AM
Beautiful, Tania. Pink was in the air, I posted PINK HAIR almost simultaneously. So funny.
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2019 at 12:03 PM
Thank you Line!
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