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Sleepless

Why is it easy for others to sleep At a single moment's notice But my eyes remain wide and fixed As if I'm under hypnosis Why is it I can never doze While others so readily collapse Even though completely shot My mind refuses to relax Wouldn't my drained muscles That desperately seek healing Be better off rejuvenating Instead of me staring at the ceiling Why can't I drift away And assume my place in a daze Drifting and floating endlessly In beautiful lethargic malaise What's the trick to make me fall Into an utterly tranquil abyss So I can preserve my own sanity With therapeutic bliss (c) Theneverendingstory.net

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Date: 3/20/2024 5:55:00 AM
I know so many who suffer insomnia. I'm one of the fortunate ones, I can get 8-9 hrs per night. Nice poem. From a fellow Woody
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Woody Francescone
Date: 3/20/2024 6:25:00 AM
Thanks. I think the middle stanza fits in but is a little awkward to the "flow\rhythm" of the whole poem (may fix at a later date). And I envy you for your ability to snooze, but I'm glad someone can!

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