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Sleeping With An Angel

As he enters the room, his mind freed from his past. Looking towards a bed. Such a thin shadows lays cast. On the angel that has taken the confines of his bed. Long, beautiful silk flowing from her head. He pushes the pen to the paper to release the selfish thoughts from his past. For she has shed a a new, bright light that is so beautiful and vast. He witnesses the angel with the blankets clutched to her side. A peaceful sleep has taken the place of the emptiness she once felt inside. Continuing to write, his pen bleeds ink onto this page. His mind lets go of the things that once caused him rage. Breathing in. Deep. Exhaling a new form of life. As he sits next to the angel laying on her side. He rests his hand onto hers, a spark ignited inside his soul. His heart grows warm as she melts the trials and tolls that have abused and tormented his core. His sleeping beauty lies with her eyes closed. A shimmer of hope released from her lips. As he rests his other hand at the edge of her hip. With his hand he brushes the silk away from her face and the purest form of beauty radiates.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/1/2010 11:35:00 AM
I miss you Logan ): best friend <3
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:46:00 AM
wonderful. beutiful. amazingly inspireing. breath taking. only a few words in my head. im a novice is also running though my head but that dosnt relate. lol.
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Date: 2/2/2010 2:37:00 PM
Did i mention this is one of my absolute favorite poems in the world? <3 this my little dinosaur is epic itsself <3 love always, pantherous-rainbow-caninus haha <3 [final edit on the name (: ]
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Date: 1/6/2010 10:50:00 AM
Oh Logan, im so glad you finished it, it truly is beautiful. One day ill be there. Kisses, this is amazing <3 I miss you, I lost your number again lol, my aim keeps deleating it or not saving it or something. Ill try to get ahold of you again soon, Love always, Your Rainbow, Your Angel
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Date: 1/3/2010 10:45:00 AM
new poem posted
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Date: 1/2/2010 8:45:00 PM
Very lovely poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Date: 1/1/2010 7:33:00 PM
beauty is shining here!!
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Date: 12/31/2009 6:33:00 PM
Very nice indeed.Hope you have a great New Year.Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:47:00 PM
Romance and love pour forth onto the paper from the pen that you have held. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/31/2009 3:39:00 PM
~~Logan~~Now you are winding down your year (2009 ) of sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. As you begin your New Year (2010 ) I wish you the best with your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I wish you good health, all the love your heart can take and peace in your life. Love and blessings to you and yours now and always, Carol
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