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Sleeping Voices

Nineteen years and my heart still breaks Somehow you completed me in the most magical way. As we continue to stroll down our soul mate's path I know that we will continue never-ending laughter. When I placed my hand in your hand and trusted you with my heart. This was only the start. To be accepted and loved unconditionally. And time spent with you Somehow when I wasn't looking your love slipped quietly into my heart. And I knew deep down we will never be apart. The love that you shine down on me is brighter than the sun. Just pure happiness makes me feel like I've won. Because your love is a gift Joan that could never be replaced. I know that these feelings will never be erased. The letter you wrote me all those years ago. Is resting in my heart forever more.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/28/2013 4:53:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Date: 7/27/2013 9:26:00 PM
Miriam, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA ...
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Date: 7/26/2013 4:34:00 AM
congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/17/2013 3:44:00 AM
- Hello Miriam - thanks for your first poem. - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry, share your thoughts and words here with us. - Welcome to read some of my poems. (give comment and get back) - Always nice with several new friends. - Good luck with your writing. - Have a great time here at P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 PM
Hi Miriam, wow! very sad... I have a contest, based on this theme. Called "Greatly Missed" hope you consider my contest. , a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/16/2013 6:10:00 PM
Miriam. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 6/15/2013 9:45:00 PM
Well written, lost love is always a nice topic because it brings out the best in ones heart. Good work :)- Edward
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