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Sleeping Succulent

sleeping succulent obelisk blooms closed tight waiting... hot sun rises red

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/24/2012 6:33:00 PM
Some great alliteration going on in here!!! So nice to read your haiku today.
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Date: 7/24/2012 3:01:00 PM
This is a truly a spectacular poem Sara! You have painted just a miraculous write my friend! What a Great Work!!
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Date: 7/24/2012 10:28:00 AM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Liked the alliteration in the first line as well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:32:00 AM
love this haiku Sara, nature as it is. harry
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Date: 7/24/2012 9:15:00 AM
Beautiful haiku Sara!Enjoyed the read.
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Date: 7/24/2012 8:52:00 AM
You are on a haiku roll, Sarah! Very nice!
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