Sleeping Succulent

sleeping succulent obelisk blooms closed tight waiting... hot sun rises red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 6:33 PM
Some great alliteration going on in here!!! So nice to read your haiku today.
Sivey Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 3:01 PM
This is a truly a spectacular poem Sara! You have painted just a miraculous write my friend! What a Great Work!!
Anish Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 10:28 AM
You stuck to the 5 7 5 form which is all to the good. Liked the alliteration in the first line as well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 9:32 AM
love this haiku Sara, nature as it is. harry
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Beautiful haiku Sara!Enjoyed the read.
Hunter Avatar
July 24, 2012 at 8:52 AM
You are on a haiku roll, Sarah! Very nice!
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