Notes About The Poem

Written, September 15, 2025
For The Contest, “Fourtle”
Sponsor, Charles Messina

(like 'bores' a hole in her pillow)

Sleep War

Like roar, he snores- Ears sore, she bores
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 4:08 PM
Sleep issues. That's for real!! Congratulations
Messina Avatar
September 22, 2025 at 3:12 AM
Loved this, Sandra. Oops the title was supposed to be two rhyming words. Next time :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Why oh why! Sleep wars indeed! Crazy!
Sharma Avatar
September 15, 2025 at 10:57 AM
What a hilarious take!! Nice.
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