Sleep

Sleep and slip into dream life all mine so sublime sleep more life hard so heavy too weak sleep and creep into peace light and free awake I weep pain heaps sad deep so tired need freed how soon can I sleep and sleep so tired need more how soon can I go so v e r y t I r e d n e e d m o r e s l e e p

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Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/10/2017 7:02:00 AM

One of my favorite things to do too Jeanie; can totally relate to your very nice sleep poem! (Especially when life is traumatic!!)~Che :)

Jeanie Bennett
Date: 2/10/2017 7:54:00 AM

TY Che !! I've had enough excess sleep that I shouldn't have to sleep the rest of my life. That world saved me many times !! Jeanie xoxo

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/9/2017 10:18:00 AM

One day, there will be plenty of time to sleep. Enjoy life while you can, Jeanie:) Fun read:)

Jeanie Bennett
Date: 2/9/2017 12:51:00 PM

TY Daniel !! Jeanie xo