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Profoundly asleep Unaware of life or death Existence on hold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/25/2016 12:17:00 PM
As a lover of Haiku, take it from me, this is awesome. Congrats, daver
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Date: 5/19/2015 2:48:00 AM
- Really a "wooow" .. this is first class, Delice !!!! - (7 !!!) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/19/2015 4:47:00 AM
Delighted you popped in and left comment. I am slowly getting familiar with the workings of site. At the moment am missing poems but eventually will have a better grasp at keeping up-to-date~Delice
Date: 5/11/2015 8:38:00 AM
Sweet expressions from wonderful lines which are so liberal to disallow the message stay hidden. I love this poem and it is definitely a 7
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/11/2015 11:36:00 AM
Every once in a while a poem emerges that makes writing worthwhile. This would be a favourite of mine. Many thanks for reading and leaving comment, it is appreciated.
Date: 5/10/2015 6:51:00 PM
Wow! What wonderful marvelous message... to sleepwalkers, and walking dead souls. Blessings your way.
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/11/2015 11:39:00 AM
Delighted you enjoyed this haiku, it is one of my favourites. Many thanks for taking the time to read and comment, it is appreciated.
Date: 5/10/2015 11:47:00 AM
Delice, no matter the meaning. I love it... SKAT (the best one I read today)
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Delice Arleen Skelly
Date: 5/10/2015 1:34:00 PM
Pleased you enjoyed this haiku. It is one of my favourites. Delice