Sleep

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(Entry for Tank-A-Crostic Time Again Poetry Contest, submitted July 8, 2024)

Slumber at nightfall… Lose the detritus of mind... Eventually Each brain neuron recharges Presenting restoration

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/30/2024 7:07:00 AM

Jim, I really like your description of sleep. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Jim Healey
Date: 7/30/2024 10:32:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. Tank-a-crostics are fun, aren't they?!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/30/2024 7:07:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start till the end... God bless you.

Jim Healey
Date: 7/30/2024 10:33:00 AM

Thank you, Beata. Glad you enjoyed it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/29/2024 2:37:00 PM

What a fantastic way of summing up the restorative power of sleep. Congrats on a job well done

Jim Healey
Date: 7/29/2024 2:43:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. Writing a tank-a-crostic was a fun challenge. Take care, Jim.