Sleep

Sleep Sleep wonders like a hateful friend Temping Yet elusive teasing the morning sun with her temping flare Yet sudden like a heart break You fall You fall You fall so hard you don’t realize your falling But falling is the best part? So you enjoy the ride ? Or you anticipate the fall Anticipating becomes your anxiety And the fall become crutch.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/4/2024 2:06:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/2/2020 4:12:00 PM

...every night of my life. Wonderful description Sayde!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 1/2/2020 5:06:00 AM

it's wonderful poem

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2019 5:51:00 AM

brilliant...