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a pointing finger might circumnavigate to poke you in the eye 10/3/2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/3/2018 11:13:00 PM

Ha, ha -- My eye can do without the perfect circle, Kim … Glad I could just read about it in your monoku, visualize it -- and leave the experience to another... :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 11:25:00 PM

LOL! Thanks, Gershon!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/3/2018 10:11:00 PM

Ouch!! Your thoughts hold so much truth. ~ Brandy

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 11:25:00 PM

Thank you, Brandy!

Chris Green

Date: 10/3/2018 1:36:00 PM

This was great, perfectly stated. Nice one Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 11:25:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 10/3/2018 1:04:00 PM

True dear, Kim! A fine one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 1:07:00 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/3/2018 9:21:00 AM

Love it! ;)) xomo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 11:30:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 10/3/2018 4:51:00 AM

Well, that one's too priceless; had to "fav".

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/3/2018 6:58:00 AM

lol! Thanks, M.L.