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a pointing finger might circumnavigate to poke you in the eye

10/3/2018

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2018

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October 3, 2018 at 11:13 PM

Ha, ha -- My eye can do without the perfect circle, Kim … Glad I could just read about it in your monoku, visualize it -- and leave the experience to another... :) gw

October 3, 2018 at 11:25 PM

LOL! Thanks, Gershon!

October 3, 2018 at 10:11 PM

Ouch!! Your thoughts hold so much truth. ~ Brandy

October 3, 2018 at 11:25 PM

Thank you, Brandy!

October 3, 2018 at 1:36 PM

This was great, perfectly stated. Nice one Kim.

October 3, 2018 at 11:25 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 3, 2018 at 1:04 PM

True dear, Kim! A fine one!

October 3, 2018 at 1:07 PM

Thank you, my friend!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

October 3, 2018 at 9:21 AM

Love it! ;)) xomo

October 3, 2018 at 11:30 AM

Thanks, Maureen!

October 3, 2018 at 4:51 AM

Well, that one's too priceless; had to "fav".

October 3, 2018 at 6:58 AM

lol! Thanks, M.L.

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