Jessica Arteaga Poet Shape

Slant

I            That        Eyes         Wind             For       Love
 know     hands      that          just              with       be
  that       could        just          whispers:      me          gone
   certain    feel          dig             stay             she'd       or
    feelings   so            deep          and              loose       I'll
     can't        buried       into            let                her          just
      be           in               paved         her            strength     slant  
       right        this           sunken        stars             and          your
        ....           hole            road           grow              sign         design

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Jimmy Anderson March 9, 2011 at 1:04 PM Very nice poem...Jimmy

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 9, 2011 at 9:50 AM Hi Jessica :) happy to see you posting again! and this one sure is impressive! I really like how you did this-- it also came across to me as looking like rain-- goes so well with you message! I hope everything is fine with you :) --nikko :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. March 9, 2011 at 9:50 AM oops & a 7 for this :D

Poet Tacito March 9, 2011 at 8:29 AM I am simply stunned...absolutely powerful! Damn. Nice job, Jessica.