Slam Time Man

15/04/2018. Slam Time Man


Im only a novice at this Slam style man,
So I’m gonna go hard on your so called Jam
Your slow n sloppy style make dissin you easy,
I’ll do it all day man, just cause it please me.

I’m quick n I’m quirky, always slick n not dirty,
Unlike the tripe from the gutter you snipe.
Ill go with my flow like I’m running the show,
While your heads hanging down ima takin your crown.

See this new kid in the cribs a crazy wordsmith,
My rhythm n rhyme makes you sound like a blacksmith.
My soft, sweet sound is more than you can handle,
Your rough, raspy rubbish is like rapping an anvil.

I’m too cool for school, but I’m nobody’s fool,
Your raps rudimentary, your speech so sedentary.
So I’ve pounded your game for my own personal gain,
And I winning this Slam just like that, Wham Bam.
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Allison Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 5:09 PM
dropping back with my congrats Jeff:-) hugs jan xx
Gentry Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome slam. Enjoyed.
Kantor Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Thank Susan
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 7:11 PM
Dang...I was beaten...noooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- anyways, good job! Congrats on your placement!
Kantor Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:49 PM
Thanks bro
Pett Avatar
May 8, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jeff, so well written a joy to read. :))
Gauthier Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:05 PM
I like your humour, Jeff. Congrats on your well deserved podium win.
Kantor Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:49 PM
Cheers Line. I loved writing this one, I guess it shows lol.
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Jeff thank you for entering the contest and following all given rules. Congrats on your placement! Please allow 24hrs for your PM to show.
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Jeff :)
Kantor Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Oh wow tx FJ. I really enjoyed writing my first Slam poem for your contest.
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 3:11 PM
A possible winner, if you ask me! Great word play, rhyme scheme, similes and...well...words in general! Great for a new poet! Heck, great for a poet in general! Good luck, Jeff! Also, just so you know, I entered too. So...you're my enemy now!!! >:3
Thomas Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 10:02 PM
Lol congrats to both of you.
Loaifhshfasjkh Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Nah, Jeff...I'm winning this. It's my DESTINY!
Kantor Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 4:35 PM
Tx mate!! I’m really thrilled you liked it. First Slam poem, only been writing for a few months but really enjoy it. Let’s hope we can get a tie for first. ;)
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2018 at 3:21 AM
I think this is just what the sponsor is looking for Jeff! great slam love the rhyme and the wit - just loved this line great word play! 'Unlike the tripe from the gutter you snipe'. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kantor Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 8:10 PM
Tx Jan that’s encouraging, particularly as I’m new to poetry and that was my first Slam attempt.
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