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Slam Time Man

15/04/2018. Slam Time Man Im only a novice at this Slam style man, So I’m gonna go hard on your so called Jam Your slow n sloppy style make dissin you easy, I’ll do it all day man, just cause it please me. I’m quick n I’m quirky, always slick n not dirty, Unlike the tripe from the gutter you snipe. Ill go with my flow like I’m running the show, While your heads hanging down ima takin your crown. See this new kid in the cribs a crazy wordsmith, My rhythm n rhyme makes you sound like a blacksmith. My soft, sweet sound is more than you can handle, Your rough, raspy rubbish is like rapping an anvil. I’m too cool for school, but I’m nobody’s fool, Your raps rudimentary, your speech so sedentary. So I’ve pounded your game for my own personal gain, And I winning this Slam just like that, Wham Bam.

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Date: 5/11/2018 5:09:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Jeff:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2018 7:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome slam. Enjoyed.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/8/2018 10:48:00 PM
Thank Susan
Date: 5/8/2018 7:11:00 PM
Dang...I was beaten...noooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO- anyways, good job! Congrats on your placement!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/8/2018 10:49:00 PM
Thanks bro
Date: 5/8/2018 10:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jeff, so well written a joy to read. :))
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:05:00 PM
I like your humour, Jeff. Congrats on your well deserved podium win.
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/7/2018 9:49:00 PM
Cheers Line. I loved writing this one, I guess it shows lol.
Date: 5/7/2018 7:26:00 PM
Jeff thank you for entering the contest and following all given rules. Congrats on your placement! Please allow 24hrs for your PM to show.
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Fj Thomas
Date: 5/7/2018 10:00:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed it Jeff :)
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 5/7/2018 9:48:00 PM
Oh wow tx FJ. I really enjoyed writing my first Slam poem for your contest.
Date: 4/18/2018 3:11:00 PM
A possible winner, if you ask me! Great word play, rhyme scheme, similes and...well...words in general! Great for a new poet! Heck, great for a poet in general! Good luck, Jeff! Also, just so you know, I entered too. So...you're my enemy now!!! >:3
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Fj Thomas
Date: 5/7/2018 10:02:00 PM
Lol congrats to both of you.
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Date: 5/2/2018 5:35:00 PM
Nah, Jeff...I'm winning this. It's my DESTINY!
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/18/2018 4:35:00 PM
Tx mate!! I’m really thrilled you liked it. First Slam poem, only been writing for a few months but really enjoy it. Let’s hope we can get a tie for first. ;)
Date: 4/15/2018 3:21:00 AM
I think this is just what the sponsor is looking for Jeff! great slam love the rhyme and the wit - just loved this line great word play! 'Unlike the tripe from the gutter you snipe'. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Jeff Kantor
Date: 4/16/2018 8:10:00 PM
Tx Jan that’s encouraging, particularly as I’m new to poetry and that was my first Slam attempt.

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