Skyline Silhouettes

I sit half crouched in a rickety chair
    My gaze riveted on the porthole
    A fuzzy mirror to the outer landscape
    Begins slowly to unscroll

A lanky ray peeps within
And falls on my droopy eye
I strain to catch the morn's glow
As day prepares to drag by

      A silhouette grim and dark
      The limping guard, I fathom
       Sound of jarring footsteps
       Echoe with staccato rhythm

Twisting forms trespass through
With rumbles of storm unseen
My mind churns in unison
Torn into tiny smithereens

       Like an urchin's grubby face
       Descending splashes of rain
       dripping down as oblong tears
        Are traced on the grimy pane

Trickling water seeps through cracks
Forms murky puddles below
A rat scurries to lap it up
Before nibbling my dead toe

         Sieged by death like silence
          All forces now seem spent
           My reinless musings merge with
           Macabre shadows on the vent.

Contest Jamie's interesting contest1
Theme: Reflections on the window
Rhyme scheme abcb
Date Feb 17 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/6/2017 11:06:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 3/6/2017 11:12:00 AM
Thanks!
Date: 2/24/2017 4:23:00 AM
One of your best poetry, Sushma:) deserves a 10 on 10:) a winner to me:)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/24/2017 4:25:00 AM
Thanks a lot , Jo Your words mean a lot to me
Date: 2/17/2017 6:42:00 AM
- A deep and poetic beautiful poem, Sushma - Best wishes in the contest, I give it a 7 ... fully deserved :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sushma A. Singh
Date: 2/17/2017 8:07:00 AM
Thanks for ur warm wishes!
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