Proverbs 14:12: "There is a way that seems right to a man, but its end is the way to death."
======================
the birds don't break on panes of sky— they break on the illusion of passage the threshold of the unseen on thinking glass is sky on faith that what seems open is *** does heaven kill by being there or seeming to be? transparency is also trap the open is what kills them
Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.