Sky of Fireflies

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written 2/13/2025

In a dark sapphire night's trance Flirtatious banter romance Bright ray light fireflies upward dance, Amorous scene within heaven's light Others ignite on steeple leaves To the moon's song in full sight. Breeze pushes through full of laughter, Serenading shuttering leaves against the rafter.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/19/2025 11:38:00 PM

Fireflies give a majestic light when they are around. They invite romance and do their thing to create a flirtatious atmosphere - So well penned Evie my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/14/2025 5:34:00 PM

Total romance …one of your vest EveM i must faV it. I could see and feel ….pangie xxfeel the night in all its brilliance, **********

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/14/2025 11:00:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Sky of Fireflies" write. "Good Luck" It was a fun contest to do. Hope you have a Blessed Valentine’s Day as you write away..................