Sky

Clouds Drift by In blue sky Changing color Creating pretty Shapes and pictures As I watch Moving Scenes Heidi Sands 8/8/17

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/9/2017 7:22:00 AM

Well depicted--I imagine a scene from a moving car or an active mind floating. So hard to paint when you have so few words--A Ninette!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 7:26:00 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your visits and supportive comments :)

Maria Williams

Date: 8/9/2017 1:32:00 AM

A truly lovely ninette Heidi...Maria

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 6:01:00 AM

Hi Maria. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/8/2017 10:03:00 PM

I really enjoyed this cleverly written and skillfully produced write my friend! You have amazed me by your quill, and delighted me by your lofty pen! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/9/2017 6:01:00 AM

Thank you Russell. I appreciate your support :)

Joseph May

Date: 8/8/2017 6:16:00 PM

Beautiful Ninette Heidi...enjoyed...

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 6:23:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this one :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/8/2017 5:58:00 PM

Very lovely Heidi! I cloud watch for hours with my 5 year old granddaughter. The clouds here in Hawaiian skies are phenomenal! : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 6:08:00 PM

That is so nice Connie. And Hawaii is so nice too! I haven't been there in a long time. I love it there. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/8/2017 5:24:00 PM

Moving clouds always has me in awe. Me and my sister used to just lay down on the grass and watch them for hours :) I love it miss Heidi, brought back great child memories :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/8/2017 5:27:00 PM

Thank you Akkina. I remember doing that when I was younger too. I am happy you love this one :) Have a nice evening!