Sky

Clouds
Drift by
In blue sky
Changing color
Creating pretty
Shapes and pictures
As I watch
Moving
Scenes


Heidi Sands

8/8/17

skyninette

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Vijay Pandit

August 9, 2017 at 7:22 AM

Well depicted--I imagine a scene from a moving car or an active mind floating. So hard to paint when you have so few words--A Ninette!

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 7:26 AM

Thank you very much Vijay. I appreciate your visits and supportive comments :)

Maria Williams

August 9, 2017 at 1:32 AM

A truly lovely ninette Heidi...Maria

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 6:01 AM

Hi Maria. Thank you :)

Russell Sivey

August 8, 2017 at 10:03 PM

I really enjoyed this cleverly written and skillfully produced write my friend! You have amazed me by your quill, and delighted me by your lofty pen! What a grand piece, Great Work!!

Heidi Sands

August 9, 2017 at 6:01 AM

Thank you Russell. I appreciate your support :)

Joseph May

August 8, 2017 at 6:16 PM

Beautiful Ninette Heidi...enjoyed...

Heidi Sands

August 8, 2017 at 6:23 PM

Thank you Joseph. I am happy you enjoyed this one :)

Connie Marcum Wong

August 8, 2017 at 5:58 PM

Very lovely Heidi! I cloud watch for hours with my 5 year old granddaughter. The clouds here in Hawaiian skies are phenomenal! : )

Heidi Sands

August 8, 2017 at 6:08 PM

That is so nice Connie. And Hawaii is so nice too! I haven't been there in a long time. I love it there. Thank you for your kind comment :)

Akkina Downing

August 8, 2017 at 5:24 PM

Moving clouds always has me in awe. Me and my sister used to just lay down on the grass and watch them for hours :) I love it miss Heidi, brought back great child memories :)

Heidi Sands

August 8, 2017 at 5:27 PM

Thank you Akkina. I remember doing that when I was younger too. I am happy you love this one :) Have a nice evening!

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