Anisha Dutta Poet Footle

Sky

SKY

        Night dark.
        Stars spark.

        Blue stars
        Red Mars.

       Twin stars
       Pulsars.

      Light caught.
      Just lost.

      Who stole?
      'Black hole.'

  03/23/17

        March 2017 Standard Contest by Brian Strand
 First Place

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Kai Michael Neumann March 27, 2017 at 5:40 AM Congratulations. Nice one. Kai

Joseph May March 26, 2017 at 11:02 AM Congrats on your win Anisha

Teddy Kimathi March 26, 2017 at 4:54 AM A brilliant footle!!! Congrats Anisha, for your well-deserved top placement in the contest!! ;-)

Kim Rodrigues March 25, 2017 at 9:22 PM Love your layout! Well done! Congrats! Anisha Dutta March 26, 2017 at 12:34 AM Thanks Kim. Love

Kim Merryman March 25, 2017 at 8:52 PM Great footles, Anisha! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim Anisha Dutta March 26, 2017 at 12:35 AM Thanks Kim for appreciation. Love

Andrea Dietrich March 25, 2017 at 7:46 PM this is really cute, Anisha. I am glad to see it on the winners' list. Congratulation.s Anisha Dutta March 26, 2017 at 12:36 AM Thanks Andrea for your appreciation. love