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Sky

September sky with red sun rising Kaleidoscopic view kilometers away Yet, its beauty transforms my spirit
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Kerr Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Sara, This poem is a credit to you. Your work hypnotises the reader with another of your portrait poems. Your imaginative deployment of colour enriches each line. I’m so grateful for your in depth comments on Me Hallucinating Howard
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2025 at 2:31 PM
Thank you, Howard. I appreciate the uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Velasco Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 6:02 AM
Such a vivid image your words make me feel the sky’s colors and the quiet lift in the spirit.
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Why, thank you, Rowena. I appreciate your visit and uplifting review of my work. Sara K
Rolland Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 7:18 PM
great images, beauty of the world is eternal , enjoyed your gracious poem
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2025 at 4:12 AM
Why, thank you, Yann. I appreciate the visit and uplifting review. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:46 PM
You nailed it, Sara K...and the illustration is well done. Best wishes with this entry in the contest, hugs, Sara B
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 4:59 PM
Thank you, Sara B. for the uplifting comments. I appreciate your visit. Sara K.
Goldsmith Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:12 PM
I enjoyed reading your lovely "Sky" write. Love your picture. "Good Luck" I also did this contest. Have a wonderful day writing away..................
Kendrick Avatar
September 1, 2025 at 12:40 PM
Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the visit and encouragement. Sara K
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