Skittering Leaves

brown head tucked

   'neath ruffled feathers

         leaves skittering by
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 5:22 AM
Enjoyed the fall to winter work..Very creative Haiku..Those birds are some tough creatures to withstand the cold like they do..Soup Mail soon..Sara
Lamoureux Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 10:20 PM
You are very good at this form, I tend to struggle with Haiku. See my response to your question on my poem.
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 18, 2013 at 4:10 PM
A delightful picture written with words. Good luck with the contest. Warm Smiles, Connie
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