Skinny Dipping With My Darlin'

The waves are lapping,do I dare to say
that they are tickling my bare bottom so.
And I am laughing out loud as we play.
My sweet darlin' and I go toe-to-toe
as into the deep blue yonder we go.
He traces all the freckles on my back;
it seems he nearly has a heart attack!
As I start to shake out my long,wet hair
he finds he's face to face with my clothes rack.
You see,I'm standing up now,proud and bare!

There was a time when I was very shy;
you wouldn't catch me undressed in the light.
But then one day I met my special guy
who let me know that my curves were just right.
My naked form was a beautiful sight.
So we swim around this ocean like fish.
I'll whisper in his ear and grant each wish.
When we reach the shore we'll roll in the sand
like sugared doughnuts stacked up on a dish.
I feel wild and free as I take his hand.


for contest"Your Birthday Suit"
sponsored by Cyndi Macmillan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/25/2012 2:52:00 PM
so joyous..a pleasure to read. Light & Love
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Date: 5/22/2012 11:57:00 AM
deb .very darring, i liked . I thought you captured the the topic beautifuly.
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:59:00 PM
wow, Deb. you did one of yourself in the water too. I LOVE this, and to think I may not have seen it if i had not viewed this winners list. congrats. It's very good.
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:58:00 PM
Congrats Deb on your win.Enjoyed it first time around.
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 5:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your birthday suit win Deb I knew you would place xx
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Date: 5/11/2012 3:06:00 AM
Deb congrats on your win...David
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Date: 5/9/2012 4:01:00 PM
this one got a rise out of me. i'm sure you didn't intend.
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Date: 5/8/2012 6:21:00 AM
Deb - hope for a win for this romantic and lovely poem - Bravo, well done. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/7/2012 9:05:00 AM
Such joy in this poem, of finding the one who would give you such confidence, and pride in who you are. That is true love! Love it!
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Date: 5/7/2012 9:04:00 AM
lovely write indeed, deb. glad to see you back on Soup
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Date: 5/7/2012 7:03:00 AM
Sexy ... love it, all the best in the comp xx
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Date: 5/6/2012 2:32:00 PM
Smile ˜ Wow, I Finally Find Myself Somehow At A Loss For Words, My Dear Precious & Beautiful Debbie * I Could Imagine His Loving & Joyfully Enraptured Heart Pounding; The Drums Of Paradise * Albeit, Twas Truly My Heart, Cast Into The Sea Of Your Beauty * A Favourite In This The Riptides Called, Heavenly Splendours * My Love to You, John!:) ˜
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Date: 5/6/2012 12:47:00 PM
A delightful poem.Great entry to the contest.Best wishes.
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