Skin Deep

Naked without color natural glamour on the outside
sweet and courteous imaginary clamor with astride
wake up and advance as is need not glitz a looker
no require for waterfalls pure spritz not a snooker
polish not and matches in everything fresh in linen
carefree when going right waltz swing if so tailspin
talkative at times when directed back to if not speechless
seen the falsity of those who walk through that are teach less
innocence lost when pain presented disasters now defiant
no need to conform but needs interaction broadcasters to be compliant
unapproachable with strangers and acquaintances alike friends yeah sure
they leave her alone when fear approaches flint a strike no love pure
no one seems to grasp it this is real though escapes demise when with them
hoping they one day will realize this is where transforming will stem

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Date: 11/17/2020 3:35:00 PM
Life is not a bed of roses...even if so, there will be thorns to bleed you...but live we must and constantly face the faceless...Well done
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 5:14:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo. You're absolutely right :)
Date: 11/17/2020 5:08:00 AM
No one should have to live by judgement of others....
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 1:18:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay. You're right. No one should :)
Date: 11/17/2020 3:56:00 AM
Many times people judge by what they see, while often jumping to wrong conclusions. Perhaps it's time to stop, think, and take a good look at ourselves! ~ Regards // paul
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Paul. You're absolutely right :)
Date: 11/17/2020 3:49:00 AM
An introverted poem of great beauty and much revelation, Thank you for sharing this delightful story of transformation. Much love.
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Pixie Dust. I appreciate your visit :)
Date: 11/17/2020 3:30:00 AM
How will your mirror be polished, if you are irritated by every rub? Rumi. You are right and this is a clever way of expressing it...
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 1:16:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One. I really appreciate your comments :)
Date: 11/17/2020 1:08:00 AM
Beauty can be appreciated more when we realise the qualities inside a person. Outward glamour is often a lie and skin deep. ~~
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Angela Crabtree
Date: 11/17/2020 1:15:00 PM
Thank you, Victor. Yes, you are right :)
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