Skin Color

man skin unmatter 
diamond unaffected 
by its put in box

Inspired by Demetrios Trifiatis.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May 6, 2024 at 7:28 AM
not nice when on is judged on colour.. nicely done.
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 8:47 PM
Kind of stupidity to judge people by their skin color instead of their deeds. Thank you! :-)
Empress Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 4:24 AM
Very deep senryu dear abdullah, well woven and delivered! Skin matters not when one perceives things from way beyond what they see. Pleasure reading your always. Sending you light
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Thank you dear lovely sweet Ink! Pleasure reading you too :-) Have a wonderful day ~ AA
Croft Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 3:24 AM
I agree. Enjoyed the simplicity of your senryu
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 6, 2024 at 8:43 PM
Thank you very much! Have a nice day ~ AA.
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