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Skies Expanse

The bird flies with wings spread wide Soaring with wind currents side to side Clear in the open blue skies expanse In a beautiful sight of freedom’s dance Swaying back and forth above in the air In a kind of release to watch and stare If only we could take such graceful steps Through days we move, not leaps to be leapt Without obstacles, just freedom that ensues I watch, I ponder, while I walk, I wonder About all the things that are out of reach While nature’s life continues to teach Heidi Sands 8/21/17

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Dean Wood
Date: 8/22/2017 12:12:00 PM
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Yes, it would be fun to be a bird.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2017 5:52:00 PM
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Yes, it sure would be nice to be a bird. Thank you for your visit to this. :)
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Russell Sivey
Date: 8/22/2017 5:46:00 AM
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Yes, nature always teaches me things everyday, all new inspirations all the time! What a grandiose write this poem really is my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning, such a well written piece, Great work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2017 5:56:00 AM
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Yes, I enjoy nature every day. Much inspiration too! Thank you for your kind comment. I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Have a nice day! :)
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Paul Schneiter
Date: 8/21/2017 10:59:00 PM
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Beautifully conceptualized and composed with a compelling message. Hugs, Paul
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/22/2017 5:46:00 AM
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Thank you Paul :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 8/21/2017 6:09:00 PM
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Yes If only Heidi, just lovely :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2017 6:11:00 PM
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Yes Gary, I wish I could be a bird and fly lol :) Thank you for your visit.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 8/21/2017 5:54:00 PM
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So well done--beautiful flow--lovely theme--good depiction of the bird's freedom, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2017 6:10:00 PM
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Thanks for your comment Vijay. I wish I could be a bird and fly ...lol :)
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Kevin Shaw
Date: 8/21/2017 5:35:00 PM
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That's a lovely descriptive rhyme, Heidi I think at one point I was soaring with the birds, kind regards, Kevin
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/21/2017 5:36:00 PM
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Thank you Kevin. Today I felt like I was too! :)

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