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Skies Expanse

The bird flies with wings spread wide
Soaring with wind currents side to side
Clear in the open blue skies expanse
In a beautiful sight of freedom’s dance
Swaying back and forth above in the air
In a kind of release to watch and stare
If only we could take such graceful steps
Through days we move, not leaps to be leapt
Without obstacles, just freedom that ensues
I watch, I ponder, while I walk, I wonder
About all the things that are out of reach
While nature’s life continues to teach

Heidi Sands

8/21/17

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Dean Wood Date: 8/22/2017 12:12:00 PM Yes, it would be fun to be a bird. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/22/2017 5:52:00 PM Yes, it sure would be nice to be a bird. Thank you for your visit to this. :)

Russell Sivey Date: 8/22/2017 5:46:00 AM Yes, nature always teaches me things everyday, all new inspirations all the time! What a grandiose write this poem really is my friend! I surely enjoyed reading your delightful poem this morning, such a well written piece, Great work!! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/22/2017 5:56:00 AM Yes, I enjoy nature every day. Much inspiration too! Thank you for your kind comment. I am so happy you enjoyed this one! Have a nice day! :)

Paul Schneiter Date: 8/21/2017 10:59:00 PM Beautifully conceptualized and composed with a compelling message. Hugs, Paul Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/22/2017 5:46:00 AM Thank you Paul :)

Gary Smith Date: 8/21/2017 6:09:00 PM Yes If only Heidi, just lovely :) Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/21/2017 6:11:00 PM Yes Gary, I wish I could be a bird and fly lol :) Thank you for your visit.

Vijay Pandit Date: 8/21/2017 5:54:00 PM So well done--beautiful flow--lovely theme--good depiction of the bird's freedom, Heidi! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/21/2017 6:10:00 PM Thanks for your comment Vijay. I wish I could be a bird and fly ...lol :)

Kevin Shaw Date: 8/21/2017 5:35:00 PM That's a lovely descriptive rhyme, Heidi I think at one point I was soaring with the birds, kind regards, Kevin Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 8/21/2017 5:36:00 PM Thank you Kevin. Today I felt like I was too! :)