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Skeleton Trees

forest in winter skeleton trees - nature’s own nudist colony 7/2/12

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Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 6/4/2013 10:50:00 PM

Excellent twist at the end Black Eyed Susan!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/22/2013 9:35:00 PM

Susan, Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/22/2013 6:30:00 PM

susan, had I ever seen this one before. Oh my gosh. I ADORE it. I am honored to share number six place with you!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/22/2013 1:30:00 AM

Hi congratulations, great haiku luv, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2013 6:10:00 PM

Hi Suan,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 8:10:00 PM

soup mail

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/19/2012 6:18:00 AM

Cool poem, interesting thoughs, enjoyed.

Doreen Wright

Date: 8/17/2012 10:20:00 PM

The title caught my eye and the words captivated me. Great read!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/24/2012 12:12:00 PM

Great metaphor here - ver original! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kathryn Collins

Date: 7/9/2012 12:17:00 PM

this is hilarious !!!! Susan.

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/6/2012 7:07:00 AM

Interesting thoughts - good luck

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/5/2012 2:56:00 AM

I do love Haiku ;}

John Loving Iii

Date: 7/4/2012 2:03:00 PM

i got a laugh out of this one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 9:17:00 PM

btw, you are pretty amazing too, my good friend!

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/3/2012 3:44:00 PM

ha! this is funny and surprising - a lot to accomplish in a haiku!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2012 12:06:00 PM

Lol... he read it on accident because I told him about the fra---- poem...lol he read this one instead..... his comment was... soup mail..... good luck... always..pd

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 7/3/2012 11:42:00 AM

wow...very nice...like it. good luck in the contest Susan...I've sent you a soup mail.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/3/2012 11:30:00 AM

I really like your approach to this contest! I wasn't expecting the nudist colony line, great surprise factor! I loved your poem! Great Work!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2012 6:33:00 AM

LOVE how you made it a nudist colony. Guess who else is up even earlier than you (on Utah time) Joe left at 3 a.m and my shoulder was in too much discomfort for me to go back to sleep. Anyway, I sure like your haiku. I did three as a series but am thinking he only might want one haiku?