Skeleton Trees

Excellent twist at the end Black Eyed Susan!

Susan, Congrats on your wonderful win! Love, Kim

susan, had I ever seen this one before. Oh my gosh. I ADORE it. I am honored to share number six place with you!!

Hi congratulations, great haiku luv, and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx

Hi Suan,Congratulations with your own favorite haiku. have yourself a nice one~ LINDA

soup mail

Cool poem, interesting thoughs, enjoyed.

The title caught my eye and the words captivated me. Great read!!

Great metaphor here - ver original! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

this is hilarious !!!! Susan.

Interesting thoughts - good luck

I do love Haiku ;}

i got a laugh out of this one.

btw, you are pretty amazing too, my good friend!

ha! this is funny and surprising - a lot to accomplish in a haiku!

Lol... he read it on accident because I told him about the fra---- poem...lol he read this one instead..... his comment was... soup mail..... good luck... always..pd

wow...very nice...like it. good luck in the contest Susan...I've sent you a soup mail.

I really like your approach to this contest! I wasn't expecting the nudist colony line, great surprise factor! I loved your poem! Great Work!!

LOVE how you made it a nudist colony. Guess who else is up even earlier than you (on Utah time) Joe left at 3 a.m and my shoulder was in too much discomfort for me to go back to sleep. Anyway, I sure like your haiku. I did three as a series but am thinking he only might want one haiku?