Andrea Romero Poet Rhyme

Skating upon Saturns rings,poem for a contest

What’s to love about skating?
Maybe it’s the feeling of being as free as having wings?
Escaping the world that held’s the blades of ancient kings 
The norm that causes the destruction of art
And the deterioration of mankind’s heart
What’s so wrong with skating upon Saturns rings?
Wishing for something without the feeling of being tied to strings
There’s so much tyranny and irony in the world
So much people fighting for rights and to be heard 
There’s so much greed
So what’s so wrong to want to skate upon Saturns rings?

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Beata Agustin February 18, 2025 at 6:37 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed. Andrea Romero February 20, 2025 at 5:47 PM Thank you!