Sajdah Al-Riyami Poet List

Skater and Lake

I glide through the mirroring
Lake
Lake; so still, so simply, indolently
worthless

Lake, disagrees, callous feelings
candors
A vociferous wind refurbishes
the was still, still
leaves

The wind is merely the umbrage
at my insult
It repudiates my
sincere apologies

I glide on the pretty
and this lake wanders
wandering so dumbfounded
at a skater's lithe

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Sue Mason July 2, 2009 at 9:17 PM Great imagery here, Sajdah !! I feel like it isn't ended though ... smile ... Congratulations on your writing being featured here at the Soup this week!!

Rhia Madison Thomer July 2, 2009 at 8:53 AM beautiful images my dear, congrats on your feature! lots of love madison

Diane Christian June 29, 2009 at 6:52 AM congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane

Kushal Poddar June 29, 2009 at 6:38 AM Life's basic principles are reflected in your writings. Amazing grace is here.

Carol Sunshine Brown June 29, 2009 at 3:40 AM Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Ernilando Tugaff June 29, 2009 at 1:02 AM Congratulations on this featured poem. Ernilando

June 22, 2009 at 11:04 AM The emotion comes through your words in this poem. Much to think about here. Thank you for sharing your this poem with us and for your kind comments on mine. Have a good day! Karen

L'Nass Shango June 12, 2009 at 3:31 PM You know the soft ice, my friend and you know the power of words ... do your thing!

Jay Loveless June 8, 2009 at 10:25 AM Pretty. I Love These Images. Nice Job. Peace. Jese

Cesar Cantu May 27, 2009 at 1:44 PM Fly, fly away blob blob fish wiii =D jojojo this poem is windy, in a soft manner; the image of the like, shining under the sun, clear morning dome, amazing!! thanks for the experience!!=)

Justin Hensley May 18, 2009 at 2:00 PM Great work! and thanks for the comments, Welcome to poetry soup!

Raul Moreno May 18, 2009 at 10:07 AM Welcome to poetry soup, nice work...Raul

Nathan Leccese May 18, 2009 at 9:26 AM Beautiful. I love your choice of words. Thanks for the comment on "Relationships" You helped out with my experiment. Nate