''sizzle''

Summertime heat wave.
Lake ducks frolic in water.
Sunset on hazy nights.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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January 26, 2012 at 10:57 PM
Kacey, a very lovely image... a very beautiful haiku.. it sizzle's in a good way... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd
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June 8, 2011 at 1:10 PM
A great haiku Kacey.Thanks for the congrats.~Teresa~
Dietrich Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 9:54 PM
I love that sizzle!!!
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June 3, 2011 at 3:55 PM
this was very nice I loved the picture you paint..cory
Amadore Avatar
June 3, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Nice haiku...second line has one syllable too many (perhaps could be changed to: "lake ducks frolic in water.") Very nice visuals.
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