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''sizzle''

Summertime heat wave. Lake ducks frolic in water. Sunset on hazy nights.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/26/2012 10:57:00 PM
Kacey, a very lovely image... a very beautiful haiku.. it sizzle's in a good way... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:10:00 PM
A great haiku Kacey.Thanks for the congrats.~Teresa~
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Date: 6/3/2011 9:54:00 PM
I love that sizzle!!!
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:55:00 PM
this was very nice I loved the picture you paint..cory
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Date: 6/3/2011 3:29:00 PM
Nice haiku...second line has one syllable too many (perhaps could be changed to: "lake ducks frolic in water.") Very nice visuals.
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