Size Doesnt Matter

how big is a soul the truth is nobody knows ~ immeasurable

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Jeff Connelly

Date: 6/19/2022 11:39:00 AM

What form you decided to call this poem David doesn't matter; it's the depth of its meaning that matters. So shoot me, I'm going to call it a Vaasokht and you & I can debate this ALL day if you want jajaja... Thanks David...

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/20/2022 11:44:00 AM

Jeff Connelly
Date: 6/19/2022 1:23:00 PM

Touché David. You're too kind. I just randomly picked a form and ended up with Vaasokht. I started 1st by trying to find a form that started with the letter "X"...

David Kavanagh
Date: 6/19/2022 12:00:00 PM

I think it’s really borderline on any form Jeff, but a Vaasokht with my double entendre for the title could work, indeed it’s all metaphorical in meaning, so no need for tape measure or iambic pentameter on this one, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 5:15:00 AM

I like this ever so much. I thought that a haiku about people was called a senryu though. You might want to check. I hate to dab with perfection, but....

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 5:21:00 AM

Your so right, I was a bit puzzled over the term soul, is it corporeal or incomporeal, what do you think, I’m a pedantic at heart myself, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 1/11/2021 3:46:00 PM

so true:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/11/2021 7:17:00 PM

Can only be, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/9/2021 6:43:00 AM

For sure

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/9/2021 8:14:00 AM

Cheers Kim