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Size Doesnt Matter

how big is a soul 
         the truth is nobody knows 
              ~  immeasurable

allegoryallusionfateironyspiritualhaiku

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Jeff Connelly

June 19, 2022 at 11:39 AM

What form you decided to call this poem David doesn't matter; it's the depth of its meaning that matters. So shoot me, I'm going to call it a Vaasokht and you & I can debate this ALL day if you want jajaja... Thanks David...

David Kavanagh

June 20, 2022 at 11:44 AM

Jeff Connelly

June 19, 2022 at 1:23 PM

Touché David. You're too kind. I just randomly picked a form and ended up with Vaasokht. I started 1st by trying to find a form that started with the letter "X"...

David Kavanagh

June 19, 2022 at 12:00 PM

I think it’s really borderline on any form Jeff, but a Vaasokht with my double entendre for the title could work, indeed it’s all metaphorical in meaning, so no need for tape measure or iambic pentameter on this one, cheers David

Caren Krutsinger

January 20, 2021 at 5:15 AM

I like this ever so much. I thought that a haiku about people was called a senryu though. You might want to check. I hate to dab with perfection, but....

David Kavanagh

January 20, 2021 at 5:21 AM

Your so right, I was a bit puzzled over the term soul, is it corporeal or incomporeal, what do you think, I’m a pedantic at heart myself, cheers David