sixty years

sixty years
i know nothing
still, the sun rises
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Croft Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 8:20 PM
Congratulations on your win
Schatz Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Karen!
Poet Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 6:41 PM
Congratulations, Robert! Your haiku is truly exceptional, brilliantly capturing the profound essence of life's invaluable worth through its evocative imagery. Thanks for your comment on my page
Schatz Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 9:37 PM
Thank you Sotto! Cheers!
Empress Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Dear Robert, words woven with emotions, whether short or long leaves a poetic impression. Somethings just remain the same although things do feel like its not the same. Congratulations on your win in bitesize contest
Schatz Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Ink Express It is an honor to be your #2
Sidwell Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 9:32 AM
Fun, meaningful, relatable, terrific! Congratulations!
Schatz Avatar
January 26, 2024 at 12:25 PM
Thank you Robert!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 8:01 PM
Congratulations! Are thoughts of life are often challenged!
Schatz Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 10:43 PM
Yes, without a doubt. Thank you Kim!
Rodgers Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 5:14 PM
Congratulations, Robert! This is a wonderful short poem and perhaps reflects the brevity and expensiveness of life. - Blessings, Daniel
Schatz Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Aw, that's sweet Daniel. Much appreciated. Thank you!!
Thomas Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 2:31 PM
As they say, the key to effective communication is brevity. In three short lines I feel as though I know you and your philosophy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this (several times). Congratulations!
Schatz Avatar
January 13, 2024 at 10:42 PM
Thank you Jaymee for you kind comments. Cheers!
Schatz Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Indeed. Thank you Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 11, 2024 at 11:28 AM
Hello Robert Schatz, yes it does. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Schatz Avatar
January 7, 2024 at 6:08 PM
Thank you for all the wonderful comments Hilda!
Greenhough Avatar
January 6, 2024 at 9:09 PM
This is a perfect zen style senryu. Saying little says much.
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