sixty years

sixty years
i know nothing
still, the sun rises

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Date: 1/26/2024 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/26/2024 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Karen!
Date: 1/26/2024 6:41:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert! Your haiku is truly exceptional, brilliantly capturing the profound essence of life's invaluable worth through its evocative imagery. Thanks for your comment on my page
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/26/2024 9:37:00 PM
Thank you Sotto! Cheers!
Date: 1/26/2024 10:31:00 AM
Dear Robert, words woven with emotions, whether short or long leaves a poetic impression. Somethings just remain the same although things do feel like its not the same. Congratulations on your win in bitesize contest
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/26/2024 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Ink Express It is an honor to be your #2
Date: 1/26/2024 9:32:00 AM
Fun, meaningful, relatable, terrific! Congratulations!
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/26/2024 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Robert!
Date: 1/13/2024 8:01:00 PM
Congratulations! Are thoughts of life are often challenged!
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/13/2024 10:43:00 PM
Yes, without a doubt. Thank you Kim!
Date: 1/13/2024 5:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Robert! This is a wonderful short poem and perhaps reflects the brevity and expensiveness of life. - Blessings, Daniel
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/13/2024 10:42:00 PM
Aw, that's sweet Daniel. Much appreciated. Thank you!!
Date: 1/13/2024 2:31:00 PM
As they say, the key to effective communication is brevity. In three short lines I feel as though I know you and your philosophy. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this (several times). Congratulations!
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Robert Schatz
Date: 1/13/2024 10:42:00 PM
Thank you Jaymee for you kind comments. Cheers!
Date: 1/11/2024 3:04:00 PM
Indeed. Thank you Darlene.
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Date: 1/11/2024 11:28:00 AM
Hello Robert Schatz, yes it does. Enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 1/7/2024 6:08:00 PM
Thank you for all the wonderful comments Hilda!
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Date: 1/6/2024 9:09:00 PM
This is a perfect zen style senryu. Saying little says much.
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