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Sixth Grade Love

. Your father died....we cried together for...'First Love' contest

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Date: 5/19/2010 4:56:00 PM
thats tragic
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Date: 4/27/2010 10:10:00 AM
This is not my six grade, sad,(B.B.)
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Date: 4/25/2010 12:16:00 PM
Love the poem. Congrats on the win. Love, Destiny
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Date: 4/25/2010 9:26:00 AM
One for the favourites Carrie.Like a good novel the reader wants more.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/24/2010 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Carrie. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/24/2010 3:39:00 PM
I've been there.... jimbo
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Date: 4/24/2010 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your success with this genuinely moving epigram, Carrie!
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Date: 4/23/2010 9:05:00 PM
loved it and Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 4/23/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my "First Love" contest with this touching Epigram ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:30:00 AM
AAAH, this is GREAT!!! (what would you have said about Donald Duck?) hahaha
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Date: 4/23/2010 8:26:00 AM
A novel introduction in six words Carrie,could also be an entry for the other contest'leave me hanging'.Thank for your your always encouraging words.Rgds Brian.Hav a good weekend
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Date: 4/23/2010 12:15:00 AM
So emotional. I know he still remembers with whom he cried then...Good luck, dear Carrie. Love, Iolanda
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Date: 4/22/2010 11:32:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:51:00 PM
Carrie~ A unique memory indeed! Best wishes in the contest! Love Laura :)
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:20:00 PM
wow , The love cry's out~~Nice write Carrie~~blessing~~Rick
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Date: 4/22/2010 7:09:00 PM
Very sad, Carrie, but I'm glad you were there when your first love needed you most. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
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