Sixth Grade Love

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                                Your father died....we cried together







for...'First Love' contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Carr Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 4:56 PM
thats tragic
Boy Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 10:10 AM
This is not my six grade, sad,(B.B.)
Orschell Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 12:16 PM
Love the poem. Congrats on the win. Love, Destiny
Strand Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 9:26 AM
One for the favourites Carrie.Like a good novel the reader wants more.Rgds Brian
Brown Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 4:51 PM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "First Love" Carrie. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol
Goff Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 3:39 PM
I've been there.... jimbo
Devonshire Avatar
April 24, 2010 at 7:48 AM
Congratulations on your success with this genuinely moving epigram, Carrie!
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 9:05 PM
loved it and Congratulations, Carrie!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 5:16 PM
Congrats Carrie on your success in my "First Love" contest with this touching Epigram ..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:30 AM
AAAH, this is GREAT!!! (what would you have said about Donald Duck?) hahaha
Strand Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 8:26 AM
A novel introduction in six words Carrie,could also be an entry for the other contest'leave me hanging'.Thank for your your always encouraging words.Rgds Brian.Hav a good weekend
Scripca Avatar
April 23, 2010 at 12:15 AM
So emotional. I know he still remembers with whom he cried then...Good luck, dear Carrie. Love, Iolanda
Mehta Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 11:32 PM
Good luck in the contest
Mckenzie Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 7:51 PM
Carrie~ A unique memory indeed! Best wishes in the contest! Love Laura :)
Devonshire Avatar
April 22, 2010 at 7:09 PM
Very sad, Carrie, but I'm glad you were there when your first love needed you most. Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
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