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Sixteen Questions

If I confessed my pensive mind, would you interrupt me? If I longed to show you something stirring, would you look? If I wrote you your own poem, would you read it? Would you press it in the pages of a book? If I tried to give you something would you take it? If you were shivering, would you let me keep you warm? If I took a little trip, would you go with me? Would you walk with me if it began to storm? If I brought you wine would you drink with me? If you wept, could I dry your tear? If I took your hand would you dance with me? If I serenaded would you hear? If I kissed you, would you keep your eyes closed? Would you comfort me if I began to cry? When I’m gone do you ever miss me? If I left you would you stop to wonder why?

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Date: 12/18/2013 12:13:00 PM
that was so sweet a beautiful poem
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Date: 12/10/2012 8:43:00 AM
could this be a song? it is good enough to be...
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Luke Irwin
Date: 12/10/2012 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Harry. Perhaps I should get my guitar out.
Date: 12/9/2012 2:14:00 PM
This is good. I like it. too many questions without answers. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:14:00 PM
Very nice Luke...Mind opening thoughts...
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