Sixteen: a Perfect Square

Sixteen: a perfect square and fourth!
Good Lord, your age is headed north!
So slow it down, just linger, tarry;
Always be my Mary Berry.

Though both of us seem not so young,
It’s clear we scarcely have begun;
Sixteen’s not old, that’s plain to see,
Not when you’ve got eternity!

So raise your voice today and sing,
One day, you’ll dance before the King.

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(a birthday card inscription on the occasion of Marion’s 16th birthday)
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Legros Kelley Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 12:35 PM
Very sweet Jeff, I truly love the verse "So raise your voice today and sing, One day, you'll dance before the King" is so precious!
Daniel Avatar
November 30, 2022 at 2:06 AM
A lovely wish for sweet sixteen, Jeff:)
Hankins Avatar
November 29, 2022 at 9:39 AM
What a sweet verse for a sweet sixteener.
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